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Beautiful Maisa

One of my peices that i hold so dear to my heart hehe i can tbeleive im releasing it to the world .Malachi Theories is on a break for a couple of days, so i am hoping to ply you wiht my poetry.

Am I lovely?

I wore this dress for you tonight.
I wanted to requite the past love.
I wanted to feel like the innocent girl
who twirled in those cheap satin dresses,
I want to be the princess.
Not like those happily ever after ones.
Just taken care of dined and wined occasionally.
I want the entity of my beauty to envelope your heart

Spin me please, tell me i look wonderful, tell me im amazing dont break my
fragile heart, its only made of glass you know, all that holds it is your sinless
love.

Can you see my beauty, is it shining radiantly, is it skidding across the surface of the moonlit water gracefully?
Touch me, I’m not going to break you know, im not the little girl.
But I still want to know .Am I lovely?
Does this expensive renewed silk do me justice?
Does the way the silk trim of this dress hangs in suspension
before my tiny feet please you.

I have seen those glorious women floating along the ground like goddesses,
Their eyes are something that captivates the heart and their figures are glorious
In their appeal . I see them dominating the eyes of you men. So am I one darling?
You’re silent darling, your eyes are moving slowly. Have I taken you’re breath away yet?
Does the slow rising and falling of your peaceful chest mean you feel
You are in the presence of someone amazing.

Things couldn’t be more perfect. I wont wish this night lasts forever
I just wish we have so many more, and i hope with each i become more

awesome, you just stay in the deck chair on the porch, invite the stars to
dinner with us, i bring the dress and let the evening decide the rest.

Do you remember that vintage wine , the crimson passionate one
which swirls in the body of our love so full of emotion rich in colour
it defines what me and you are. Its colour is so hard to find, the depth
of its understanding cannot be comprehended.

This silk is so comforting, the way it slithers across my open back,
the way it clings to my unwillingly exposed flesh. It makes everything so beautiful
It reminds me of a Mediterranean sunset, so powerful and sharp, so clear about
the imagery it wants to achieve.

Descending into your open arms, soft and assuring
Towering, twisting and turning. Dancing upon the
sheets of happiness. Before you admire me once more.
Tell me . Am i lovely?
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